My post on
calcium catalysis didn't really engage a wide audience of readers the way I had wanted it to. A few kind souls helped me refine my approach, which I thought might work better as a radio blurb.
Dear Jake: Thanks, I took on
your challenge. Here's my new entry:
Music: Hall & Oates, Bird and the Bee
Readers, whaddaya think? More accessible, less? Please let me know in the comments!
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